March 21st

Today we finished off the order of our pitch and also sorted out our opening paragraph.we also work shopped two ideas for Julius where cinna is intimidating the 5 accused in the same room. The mug Shot idea is now set.we just have to look into what detectives would actually ask the accuses to make the speech in the scene more realistic. We decided we will be using the accused speaking in Shakespeare and cinna mostly in modern English.